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A Midnight Visitor Part 4 (FINAL)

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Finally we have the last page of my short comic showing the love affair between Princess and Spice but if this is really the final who knows? Don't they say love has no boundaries? and we all know the more frowned upon a love is, the more passionate it is :heart: anyways the horses used in this image are:
Ridiculam Paulo Princeps fav.me/d7fbaaj
Aspice Et Inferni fav.me/d76rw0f
Civitas Levi fav.me/d796si2
Res Novae fav.me/d74i92f

Story Time!
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 The two forbidden lovers slept together in perfect harmony under the canopy of leaves from the forest around them. It wasn't until the first beams of light that Spice's crimson red eyes fluttered open and with a gentle kiss on Princess' withers he got up and began eating a breakfast of grass near his mare. He couldn't help but stare at her flawless and refined face as she slept angelically in the morning light. He could just watch her forev-

*crack* *snap*

The sound of twigs and leaves rustling in the distance broke his gaze and caused him to snap his head up to the source of the noise. Princess heard it too and was startled awake, instead of looking looking in the direction of the noise though, she looked up at Spice who was alertly scanning the horizon for intruders. It felt like he was watching for hours until the silhouette of  two horses appeared in the distance. Spice tensed up immediately, he was even holding his breath, while Princess quickly followed his gaze to the horses in the distance and her heart may have stopped for a second. She gasped at the sight causing the horse to look at them.

 Spice and his locked eyes, the new stallion was a seal bay and Princess obviously knew him by the look of terror as she scrambled to her feet, and this must be for good reason because that stallion had a fire in his eyes so bright it could be seen from a hundred feet away. The other stallion turned his head to fully look at Spice and his mouth curled up into a snarl, "You...!" He growled out and began a furious gallop towards Spice.

"Levi! Please no!" Princess shouted when she finally scrabled to her feet, "Spice! You've got to get out of here!" She yelled, her eyes darting between the ever quickly approaching Levi and her newly beloved mate. Her heart was beating a mile a minute, "Nova!" She called to the grullo mare quickly following behind Levi, "Please! Make him stop!" She practically screamed in fear.

Despite her warnings it was like both her and Nova weren't there, the stallions could only see each other and they both had a chosen prize they wanted to claim. "I will not let you take her away!" Spice roared with his head lowered as Levi galloped closer, "She is my love and you cannot separate us!"

Levi snorted and stopped in front of Spice, "Take her away? You took her from me! She is in my harem and we were in harmony until you waltzed in and ran away with her!" He squealed and stamped his hoof on the rich forest soil, "Get out of my territory!"

"I will! If You'll let me take Princess with me!" With the harshness of Spice's voice, his voice seemed to soften as he spoke her name, "Or I refuse to leave!"

"You will not be doing such a thing! Leave her with me or I'll leave your skull smashed in the soil!" Levi reared up on his hind legs and furiously pawed at the air threateningly.

"She doesn't even love you, you ignorant fool!" Spice reared up higher than Levi and struck the air above Levi's head.

The two stallions ran out of verbal abuse so they tore into physical abuse with terrifying roars and growls that awoke the entire farm with the two mares, Princess and Nova, unable to do anything to stop the boys from tearing into each other. There was hooves, teeth, and horns being tossed all over the place as the two stallions fought, this was Levi's first fight but he was seeing so much red he had no time to fear and wanted nothing more than to gauge his teeth into this dark colored stallion's spinal column. Spice's thoughts weren't any kinder. The dark grullo stallion was far more experienced in the fight but also had less energy in his fight so his bites and kicks caused more damage but Levi dodged them readily and so the two were very evenly matched.

The fight seemed to last for ages and blood splattered both the floor and all the horses around the scene, both of the stallions were severely hurt from their wounds and it seemed even until Levi was able to headbutt Spice in the gut with his horns. With a pained groan and the traumatized screams of Princess echoing in his ears he hung his head and tucked his tail for the first time in years to a younger stallion and galloped as fast as his wounded self could carry him. He jumped the fence with the last of his energy before collapsing on the road in front of the farm from blood loss.

Princess was hysterical, "How could you do this? You know I love him! He loved me! Levi you killed him!" She cried with tears pouring out of her eyes at the same rate blood was pouring from his wounds but Levi did not have the energy to answer and collapsed to the ground. Nova gasped and ran to his aid while Princess ran away, as far away as the fence would allow her from him.

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Long story is long O_O I hope it wasn't too long so ya'll would still read it >.< So many feels and so much drama I don't know what to do! D: If this really the final page? I doubt it, I'll probably keep going actually >.>

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breed by Fargonon
art and story by me!
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Make
Hewlett-Packard
Model
HP Deskjet 1050 J410 TWAIN
Date Taken
Aug 17, 2014, 2:07:30 AM
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GingerLisous's avatar
Levi was doing his job but all the feels ;3; I know my Donec will kill to protect his harem lol